Man the timing for this video is unnervingly on point. Thanks for the enlightenment!
Nice work man!
This was one of the funniest videos I've seen in a while. Good work!
pretty interesting game, I got to level 8. the best part for me though was the soundtrack and comments you wrote for each stage. Good work.
Thank you :D Making the soundtrack was one of the most fun parts to make :3
Gotta say that I was impressed, Now I'm not a voice actor myself (by any means) however, it's obvious that you've got talented. Now the weakest performance, was the clip from 00:33 - 00:39 in my opinion it sounded a bit too forced, maybe you intended it that way for what you were making though. It wasn't bad by any means, just under par when compared to the other voices, they sound amazing. Anyway that was my two cents, keep at it....
You're consistently great at faces. Perhaps that's what you draw the most. However, the anatomy is lacking and so are the proportions.
You're strong suit seems to definitely be drawing in a heavily stylized cartoony look. You also seem to have a firm understanding of color in general, and that's good. These things are especially important in animation. But make sure to study from life as well as it'll only improve all other aspects of drawing, if you're already doing so that's great keep it going, but if not you should start doing it. Tackling one portion of the body at a time will drastically improve anatomy.
Lastly gesture drawing will help a lot. I'm not saying your gestures are bad. Not at all. But gesture can always be improved and it does improve understanding and feel for getting proportion right. Anyway, this isn't meant to come across as something really negative despite what it may sound like. You have great potential, but you seem to be missing a certain foundation and I'd hate to see you not achieve that by exclusively sticking within a comfort zone, that's all.
Nice work, you're really good at faces. For improvement, I'd say try and aim for getting consistently clean lines. Like the girl in the middle is very good. The second girl while good, seems to have been drawn by chicken scratching (multiple lines built up on each other). There's nothing wrong with doing that if it's a deliberate style choice, but unless it is, it's generally considered a bad habit. Anyway, keep up the good work. It's looking cool!
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